jazz work in progress

"Take Me With You"
--swing feel, moderately fast

-verse freely, almost spoken
We joked a little while
And I made her smile for a little while,
Then I asked her kinda sly
For some numbers that I could dial.

She glanced away real fast and with far much less than grace,
She said "How's that one girl?" with that smirk upon her face.
I said:

-chorus very swing, more musical
Jealousy will get you nowhere,
But flattery will get you everywhere,
And where you're takin me I don't care,
Just come on baby, take me with you!

that's all so far, still working on a couple more verses, bridge, etc. Could be a hit someday! Feedback would be awesome!

--Pat